如何讓高考英語(yǔ)作文妙筆生花

　　要在高考英語(yǔ)作文中得到高分，考生必須讓自己的文章有“亮點(diǎn)”，做到妙筆生花，體現(xiàn)出對(duì)語(yǔ)言的駕馭能力。要做到這一點(diǎn)并不容易，但考生可以從以下幾個(gè)方面去努力。下面是小編為您收集整理的如何讓高考英語(yǔ)作文妙筆生花，供大家參考!

　　如何讓高考英語(yǔ)作文妙筆生花

　　一、遣詞方面：用詞要貼切而豐富，善用短語(yǔ)

　　詞匯是語(yǔ)言的建筑材料，文章的好壞，選詞很關(guān)鍵，如果用詞精湛，就會(huì)使文章“亮”起來(lái)。

　　1. 措辭要貼切具體

　　試比較下面句子：

　　a man is walking down the street.

　　a man is strolling down the street.

　　通過(guò)比較可以看出，前一句不如后一句表達(dá)得具體、生動(dòng)。一個(gè)詞如果內(nèi)涵越具體，那么在特定的場(chǎng)景中恰當(dāng)?shù)厥褂盟蜁?huì)收到意想不到的效果。很多同學(xué)寫(xiě)作時(shí)常隨便用一個(gè)很籠統(tǒng)的詞來(lái)描述一個(gè)具體事物或人，如 a nice man給人感覺(jué)很籠統(tǒng)空泛，我們可以用很多有個(gè)性的、具體的詞描繪一個(gè)人，如 generous(大方的，慷慨的)，humorous(幽默的)，smart(漂亮的，瀟灑的)，kind-hearted，warm-hearted，hospitable(好客的,招待周到的)，gentle(文雅的)，optimistic(樂(lè)觀的)，easy-going(隨和的)，spirited(英勇的)，cultivated(有教養(yǎng)的)，manly(有男子氣概的)等等。

　　2. 用詞要簡(jiǎn)潔多樣

　　在英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)作中，遣詞一定要避免不必要的重復(fù)，如果用詞重復(fù)，寫(xiě)出的句子往往單調(diào)乏味，文章沒(méi)有感染力。用詞多樣化可以使句子表意生動(dòng)，增強(qiáng)文章的整體表達(dá)效果。如：

　　chart1 shows the daily average amount of time the students of the school spend on different after-class activities. the students put the most time，93 minutes，into their homework，and next in line is watching tv，which takes up 46 minutes. they put in about the same amount of time listening to music and working on the computer，34 minutes and 30 minutes each. while 25 minutes is spent on sports only 12 minutes goes into housework...(2004北京卷)

　　文中運(yùn)用了 “spend on” “put....into” “take up” “put in...doing” “goes into” 等一系列的不同詞語(yǔ)，來(lái)說(shuō)明學(xué)生六項(xiàng)課余活動(dòng)所花時(shí)間，雖然講的都是類似的情況，但沒(méi)有一個(gè)詞組是重復(fù)的。這充分體現(xiàn)了語(yǔ)言的運(yùn)用技能，絕對(duì)可使整篇文章“亮”起來(lái)。

　　3. 要善于運(yùn)用短語(yǔ)

　　短語(yǔ)用得好，會(huì)給評(píng)卷員留下深刻印象。如：

　　when he was a child，he wanted to learn everything.( 普通)

　　when he was a child，he had a strong appetite for knowledge.(高級(jí))

　　4. 要避免漢語(yǔ)思維

　　用詞要符合英語(yǔ)習(xí)慣，避免漢語(yǔ)思維的影響，如某些名詞和動(dòng)詞搭配已約定俗成，不能隨意打亂其搭配習(xí)慣，否則會(huì)顯得生硬和詞不達(dá)意。如漢語(yǔ)中的“學(xué)到知識(shí)”，英語(yǔ)中就不能說(shuō)“l(fā)earn knowledge”，而要說(shuō)acquire knowledge (獲得知識(shí)) 。類似的動(dòng)賓結(jié)構(gòu)還有achieve success (獲得成功)，gain reputation (獲得聲譽(yù))，attain one’s end (達(dá)到目的)等。

　　二、造句方面：句式要準(zhǔn)確而多變，活用復(fù)合句

　　簡(jiǎn)單句用得太多，會(huì)造成文章讀起來(lái)乏味。在評(píng)卷員看來(lái)，同樣意思的內(nèi)容，能夠運(yùn)用比較復(fù)雜的句式結(jié)構(gòu)來(lái)表達(dá)，當(dāng)然會(huì)認(rèn)為其運(yùn)用語(yǔ)言的能力要比只會(huì)用簡(jiǎn)單句來(lái)表達(dá)要強(qiáng)，評(píng)分自然就高。

　　1. 巧用非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞

　　運(yùn)用非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞，可使文句看起來(lái)更簡(jiǎn)潔，使語(yǔ)言更加豐富多彩，重點(diǎn)更加突出，增加文采。如：

　　i covered my ears，trying to keep the noise out，but failed. (2004廣東卷)

　　2. 巧用with復(fù)合結(jié)構(gòu)

　　“with+名詞/代詞+現(xiàn)在分詞/過(guò)去分詞/形容詞/副詞/介詞”結(jié)構(gòu)，常作伴隨狀語(yǔ)以增加被描繪內(nèi)容的生動(dòng)性和情感性，使文章讀起來(lái)更簡(jiǎn)潔明了。試比較：

　　i couldn’t go on studying because there was so much noise troubling me. (普通)

　　i couldn’t go on studying with so much noise troubling me. (高級(jí))(2004廣東卷)

　　3. 巧用復(fù)合句

　　高考評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)強(qiáng)調(diào)使用語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)的數(shù)量和復(fù)雜性，鼓勵(lì)考生盡量使用較復(fù)雜的結(jié)構(gòu)，并且對(duì)由此產(chǎn)生的錯(cuò)誤采取了寬容的態(tài)度。如果恰當(dāng)運(yùn)用各類從句，就會(huì)使文章出彩。如：

　　(定語(yǔ)從句) what’s more，people have easy access to the internet，which enables them to send and receive e-mails whenever they like. (2006廣東卷)

　　4. 巧用倒裝句、感嘆句、強(qiáng)調(diào)句、虛擬語(yǔ)氣句等

　　使用這些句式可使文章化平淡為生動(dòng)，加強(qiáng)語(yǔ)氣，使評(píng)卷老師感受作者的強(qiáng)烈情感。

　　(倒裝句)only in this way can internet bars be well used by people. (2003 上海春季)

　　(感嘆句)i thought，“how hard mum is working! she must be very tired.”(2004重慶卷)

　　5. 巧用排山倒海句

　　如能運(yùn)用一個(gè)個(gè)排比句、對(duì)偶句、不定式或短語(yǔ)，可令文章增色不少，會(huì)給評(píng)卷員眼前一亮的感覺(jué)。如：

　　the purpose of the programme are to make our school more beautiful，to make the air cleaner and fresher，and to turn our school into a better place for us to study and live in. (2004 福建卷)

　　三、謀篇方面：結(jié)構(gòu)要清晰而流暢,巧用過(guò)渡詞

　　眾所周知，語(yǔ)言的最高層次不是傳統(tǒng)語(yǔ)法所說(shuō)的句子，而是語(yǔ)篇。語(yǔ)篇指的是一系列連接的語(yǔ)段或句子構(gòu)成的語(yǔ)言整體。一篇好的文章不但句子正確，要點(diǎn)齊全，更重要的是有效地使用了語(yǔ)句間的連接成分。因此，恰當(dāng)使用好連接性的詞語(yǔ)和句子，是使作文獲得高分的一個(gè)重要因素。請(qǐng)仔細(xì)體會(huì)下文中的連接性詞句(用黑體標(biāo)出)：

　　now in the country areas，there are many children out of school. the reasons can be listed as follows:

　　to begin with，most families are poor and can’t afford their education. as a result，they have no choice but to stay at home and make money. in addition，some parents think daughters needn’t go to school. therefore，they don’t let them go to school. finally，some children are not interested in their studies. to make matters worse，some wouldn’t like to go to school.

　　as far as i’m concerned，all the children including girls should be educated. besides，the whole society should pay attention to it because they’ll play an important part in the future of our country.

　　下列各組表示列舉或補(bǔ)充的短語(yǔ)或句式非常實(shí)用，對(duì)高考寫(xiě)作很有幫助：

　　(1)firstly...，secondly...，thirdly...，finally...

　　(2)in the first place...，in the second place...，in the third place...，lastly...

　　(3)to begin with...，then...，furthermore...，finally...

　　(4)to start with...，next...，in addition...，finally...

　　(5)first and foremost...，besides...，last but not least...

　　(6)most important of all...，moreover...，finally...

　　如果只有兩層意思，可選用下列兩組中的任一組：

　　(1)on the one hand...，on the other hand...

　　(2)for one thing..., and for another thing...

　　英語(yǔ)作文范文：二胎政策

　　話題：隨著國(guó)家的二胎政策的公布，也許在不久的將來(lái)，獨(dú)生子女就成了少數(shù)群體了。在還沒(méi)有二胎成群的時(shí)候，結(jié)合獨(dú)生子女利與弊闡述一下你的觀點(diǎn)。

　　參考范文一

　　My father used to talk to me about his five siblings. He used to say that I was unfortunate that I had none. And I used to envy him and wonder how nice it would be to have a houseful of brothers and sisters. I also used to wonder what would happen to me if I were to lose my parents. Frankly speaking, I do not have to share anything with anybody. I own all my parents' love. I can ask for anything I want. I always wear new clothes and eat the best food. Since my parents spend all their money on me, I can study at the best university of the country.

　　Lucky as I am, I now and then feel very lonely and I have nobody to complain about my loneliness. How I long for a quarrel with my brothers and sisters! Of course I have classmates and friends, but they are different. Sometimes I feel so pessimistic that after my parents leave the world, I will have no blood relatives left to share with me the fond memories of my parents. Furthermore, I am likely to become selfish while I realize the world is for sharing.

　　So, I am happy but lonely; I am fortunate but piteous; I am loved but spoiled; I am well-bred but selfish, because I am the only child of the family.

　　參考范文二

　　Most of us are the only child in our family. We have no brothers or sisters. Our family mainly consists of our mom,our dad and us. We are growing up in a world differently from our parents’. And we will be the future leaders of China. Some day we have to work hand in hand with each other and make China more and more beautiful. So we must learn to love each other like brothers and sisters.

　　It’s hard to think how difficult life would be if we had a sibling.We never have to share anything at home. Of course, we might have cousins, but we don’t have to live with them! Our parents try to give us the best, and the best doesn’t need sharing between two or three children. Do we ever ask ourselves if we are spoiled?

　　A recent study has found that many children don’t know how to love others! We don’r know the value of money. We don’t know how hard our parents are to support us. We don’t want others to regard us as spoiled, do we? Well, why not start now to help our parents at home, share a game with one of our friends or value the opinions of our classmates, even if we don’t always agree? In a word, we must learn to love each other!