作文改錯(cuò)很容易混淆，總覺得哪個(gè)都對，其實(shí)不是哦。下面是學(xué)習(xí)啦小編給大家整理的一些初中英語書面表達(dá)與改錯(cuò)，供大家參閱!

　　書面表達(dá)與改錯(cuò)篇1：

　　I am a very active girl in my class. I have many hobby，1.________

　　such as writing stories, playing piano and singing English2.________

　　songs. My most favorite subject is English. I became3.________

　　interested in it when I was very young. My dream is 4.________

　　to study abroad. But now I need to improve my English5.________

　　and learn more about west culture as well. I will be6.________

　　able to improving the friendship between China and7.________

　　the rest of the world. I hoped my dream will come true.8.________

　　And I believe in nobody can change my mind. I will work9.________

　　harder and follow my heart, no matter how happens!10.________

　　答案與解析：

　　1.hobby→hobbies many后接復(fù)數(shù)名詞，下文such as后列舉的內(nèi)容也是提示。

　　2.piano前加the play the piano表示“彈鋼琴”，是固定搭配。西洋樂器類名詞前常用定冠詞the。

　　3.去掉most favorite本身就是“最喜愛的”，因此原句語義重復(fù)。

　　4.√

　　5.But→So 前后邏輯上是因果而不是轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系。

　　6.west→western 依據(jù)語境這里表示“西方文化”，應(yīng)用形容詞western作定語。

　　7.improving→improve be able to do sth.表示“能夠做某事”。

　　8.hoped→hope 這里表示說話人現(xiàn)在的愿望，故應(yīng)用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。

　　9.去掉in I believe that..我相信……。believe in表示“信任，信仰”，其后不能接從句。

　　10.how→what no matter what happens無論發(fā)生什么，what充當(dāng)從句的主語。

　　書面表達(dá)與改錯(cuò)篇2：

　　My father and I am taking a camping trip in July1.________

　　and August. We will travel for about two months but2.________

　　will tour the United States and parts of the Canada. We3.________

　　have decided to camp because it does not spend as much4.________

　　as vacationing in hotels, but we had to plan carefully. I5.________

　　think the car what we are going to drive is very small, so6.________

　　we decide to take only one small suitcase for both of them7.________

　　and as few camping things as possibly. We will take some8.________

　　medicine with us prevent insects from hurting us, and also9.________

　　some food for picnics. I'm sure that we will have fun.10.________

　　答案與解析：

　　1.am→are 本句的主句是my father and I，所以謂語動(dòng)詞用復(fù)數(shù)形式。

　　2.but→and 此處表示的是順承關(guān)系，而不是轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系。

　　3.刪去第二個(gè)the 一般情況下，表示國家的單個(gè)詞語前不加冠詞。

　　4.spend→cost 本句的主語不是人，而是it，所以用cost。

　　5.had→have 短文全篇敘述的都是現(xiàn)在和將來的情況。

　　6.what→that/which或刪去what “that/which we are going to drive”是定語從句，修飾先行詞the car，關(guān)系代詞在從句中作賓語，可以省略。

　　7.them→us 根據(jù)文章的開頭部分可知這里指的是作者本人和作者的父親，因此應(yīng)用us。

　　8.possibly→possible as...as possible表示“盡可能……”。

　　9.prevent前加to 此處是不定式短語作目的狀語。

　　10.√

　　書面表達(dá)與改錯(cuò)篇3：

　　After I finished the school this year, I began to1.________

　　look for work. Now several month later, I still hadn't 2.________

　　found the job that I was interested. Last Sunday morning，3.________

　　I received a phone call from a man calling him Mr. Smith.4.________

　　He said to me on the phone, “I hear you do very well in your5.________

　　studies. I may provide a job for you.” I entered 6.________

　　his office with a beaten heart. How I hoped that I 7.________

　　will go through the job-hunting talk today and he would8.________

　　take me on as a lab assistant. But to my surprised, 9.________

　　what he said disappointing. He only needed a model.10.________

　　答案與解析：

　　1.去掉the finish school是固定搭配，表示“畢業(yè)”。

　　2.month→months month是可數(shù)名詞，several暗示應(yīng)用復(fù)數(shù)形式。

　　3.interested后加in be interested in是固定搭配，表示“對……感興趣”。

　　4.him→himself calling himself Mr. Smith短語作定語，修飾a man表示“自稱Mr. Smith”的男子。

　　5.do→did 根據(jù)邏輯可知這里表示畢業(yè)前的情況，故用一般過去時(shí)。do well in“干得好”。

　　6.√

　　7.beaten→beating a beating heart“忐忑不安的心”。

　　8.will→would 這里應(yīng)考慮主從句時(shí)態(tài)的呼應(yīng)，故用過去將來時(shí)。

　　9.surprised→surprise to one's surprise是固定搭配，表示“令某人驚訝的是”。

　　10.said后加was what he said是主語從句，“他的話是令人失望的”。句子缺少系動(dòng)詞。