2017年10月自考英語寫作答案
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全國2010年10月自學(xué)考試英語寫作試題
I. Supply the missing paragraph (20 points)
The following passage is incomplete with one body paragraph missing. Study the passage carefully and write the missing paragraph in about 100 words. Make sure that your tone and diction are in unity with the passage provided.
Benefits of Face-to-Face Communication
Face-to-face communication is the first basic communication method. In the era of information technology, people are now faced with a myriad of communication options. Be it letters, emails, or telephone conversations, none is more effective than face-to-face interaction, because it helps the speaker to convey a complete message, obtain immediate feedback, and build trusting relationship.
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In addition, face-to-face communication provides immediate feedback. If the message is ambiguous, the speaker can clarify it right away. The listener can raise questions if he feels confused. Hence, the speaker can detect and prevent possible misunderstandings or confusion among the listeners. Since all the people involved in the interactive process can easily see each other, their approval, interest, or disregard can easily be deduced and dealt with. Renowned CEOs, like Bill Gates, attach much importance to face-to-face communication and highly appreciate the timely responses of the staff at business meetings.
Lastly, face-to-face communication enhances the relationship between people. It’s difficult to build rapport only over emails or through phone calls. It seems that people tend to depend less and less on face-to-face talks to express their gratitude and appreciation, but this form of contact is extremely important for establishing trusting relationship. As an office worker, what would you feel when your colleagues come up to your desk and congratulate you on the great report you sent or the presentation you made recently? If a team leader calls his team members to the office just to say “thanks” and pat their backs, the team will be sure to take a liking to him immediately.
Even in the modern world full of electronic communication devices, face-to-face communication remains the most powerful human interaction. Without face-to-face communication, information recipients have to interpret an incomplete message, because much of the information gained in communication is derived from non-verbal cues. They have no chance to question the speaker or clarify the information. Moreover, they are unlikely to feel warmth from or build trust on the message deliverer. Therefore, face-to-face interaction cannot
be replaced by other forms of communication.
II. Write an outline (20 points)
Read the following passage carefully and compose a “topic outline” for it.
How to Lose Gracefully
Losing is a necessary part of life. Nobody likes to lose, yet in every even remotely competitive situation, someone will. Perhaps it’s the next promotion at work, or the selection of a student union leader. Even small things, like playing a card game, have an air of winning and losing to them. However, it’s what you do with that failure that makes all the difference. Assuming one is the "loser," all of these situations present a choice. One can either be a sore loser or a graceful loser.
Losing gracefully is the first step to move forward and overcome the loss. In fact, graceful losers are hardly impacted by the loss at all, because they know another opportunity awaits them. They congratulate their opponent, embrace their failure and try to figure out where they went wrong. Graceful losers do not take failure personally, but they do accept responsibility. They learn from the loss, and then apply what they’ve learned so that next time they may win.
Sore losers are quite the opposite. Perhaps the biggest risk of being a sore loser is this loss of hope for the future. Sore losers are stuck on the loss, and in so being, they may miss out on a new opportunity because of their poor attitude. Sore losers get angry. They blame their loss on the opponent, not taking responsibility for their own actions. Sore losers hold on to resentment, and may internalize their failure, leading to low self-esteem or even depression.
Of course, making lemonade out of life’s lemons is not always easy. In fact, it can be downright hard. But it is a principle worth living by. How can you lose gracefully, even when you really, really wanted to win? Essentially, you need to realize that you never really lose.
In fact, once you learn how to release the feelings about losing—the anger, the embarrassment, and the resentment—you will always feel successful. And then an amazing thing will happen. When you FEEL successful, you will ACT successful, and then, sure enough, you will BE successful. As you let go of the feelings that cause the sensation of loss, you discover that you never really lose anything.
The objects in your life are always changing, but what you are at your core is changeless. The more you release on the fears and negativity about winning and losing, the easier it will be to accept things that do happen. When you lose or win, you’ll then be able to do so gracefully.
By releasing your negative feelings, you allow the comings and goings of your life to simply happen as they do. This gives great relief and also allows you to be present with and for the new opportunities that are here every moment.
Everyone has failed at some point in his or her life. This is nothing exceptional. Even in adverse
situations, one should keep in mind the principle of losing gracefully. A graceful loser will turn into a potential winner while a sore loser a bigger failure.
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III. Compose an essay (60 points)
Some people think good movies should be instructive and entertaining at the same time. What is your opinion? Write a 300-word expository essay stating your views.
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2007年10月全國高等教育自學(xué)考試英語寫作試題
?、?Supply the missing paragraph(20分)
It is obvious that once you start exercising you will be in better shape.You willbe healthier in a physical way .It is probable that you will lose weight and you muscles will get stronger and stronger.With the strengthening of your day‵s work or catch a cold due to sudden changes of weather. Your body will fell good and full of energy,and it will respond immediately to any action you want to do and any activity
that has to be done with high spirits.
【評分參考】
1. 第一部分滿分20分,按四個檔次給分。其中12分為該部分得及格分, 需要慎重把握。
2. 提供的答案僅供參考。如果考生的回答與參考答案意思相近,或者思路 新穎,且有創(chuàng)見,即使在整體上不夠全面,也應(yīng)酌情給高分,但不得超過該題最高分值。如果考生的答案與參考答案不完全吻
合,但上下一致,與其連冠,條理清晰,應(yīng)按正確答案給分。
3. 寫作的用詞量如果不符合要求,應(yīng)酌情減分。
4. 答題中的拼寫錯誤可以每四個扣一分,但不重復(fù)扣分。
5. 分值不得出現(xiàn)0.5分。
第一檔:20—17分
上下連貫,意思完整,語言通順,表達清楚,很少有語法錯誤和拼寫錯誤。
第二檔:16—12分
上下較連貫,表達較清楚,有少數(shù)語法錯誤和拼寫錯誤。
第三檔:11—18分
上下基本連貫,語言表達不夠清楚,有較多語法錯誤和拼寫錯誤。
第四檔:7—0分
上下不夠連貫,語言不夠通順,表達不夠清楚,有大量語法錯誤和拼寫錯誤。
?、?Write an outline(20分)
Topic outline
Ⅰ.Introduction:three Africas with different climates, terrains and styles of life suited to the
environment
A. Inaccurate public impression of Afica
B. Thesis:One should remember that the continent can be divided into three different
Africas.
?、?Northern dessert regions
A.A place of hot climate and little land for farming.
B.Population clustered into cities or near water
C.People living on farming and trading with Europ
?、?Southeastern grasslands
A.A better environment for animal life and some crops
B.People living on cattle rasing,hunting,crops growing,and fishing
C.Denser population in areas with adequate rainfall
?、?Western jungle areas
A.A region close to Hollywood movie image
B.Some highly modernized countries
C.People living on farming and fishing
?、?Conclusion:a continent with varied environments
A.Climate ranging from deserts to rain forests
B.Lifestyles varying from rural villages to industrial cities
C.Jungle life making up only a small portion
【評分參考】
1. 第一部分滿分20分,按四個檔次給分。其中12分為給部分的及格分,需要慎重把握。
2. 考生只能按提型要求寫出“Topic Outline”,如用“Sentence Outline”或者兩種混用,則降檔處
理。如寫成“Summary”或其它形式,按零分處理。
3. 提供的答案僅供參考。如果考生的答案在層次劃分上與參考答案不一致,但條理清晰、合理,
概括完整,應(yīng)按正確答案給分。
4. 答題中的拼寫錯誤可以每四個扣一分,但不重復(fù)扣分。
5. 分值不得出現(xiàn)0.5分。
第一檔:20——17分
概括準確,內(nèi)容完整,語言通順,表達清楚。
第二檔:16——12分
概括較完整,個別要點有遺漏,語言較通順,表達較清楚。
第三檔:11——8分
概括不夠全面,部分要點有遺漏,語言基本通順,表達基本清楚。
第四檔:7——0分
概括不全面,遺漏大部分要點,語言不夠通順,表達不夠清楚。
III.Compose an essay(60分)
參考答案略。
【評分參考】
1. 第三部分滿分60分,按六個檔次給分。其中36分為該部分的及格分,需要慎重把握。
2. 寫作的用詞量如果不符合要求,應(yīng)酌情減分。
3. 作文中的拼寫錯誤可以每四個扣一分,但不重復(fù)扣分。
4. 分值不得出現(xiàn)0.5分。
第一檔:60——55分
作文切題,內(nèi)容充實,結(jié)構(gòu)清晰、完整,語言通順,表達清楚,用詞準確,沒有語法錯誤,很
少有拼寫錯誤。
第二檔:54——46分
作文切題,內(nèi)容充實,結(jié)構(gòu)清晰、完整,語言通順,表達清楚,用詞基本得當(dāng),有個別語法錯
誤和拼寫錯誤。
第三檔:45——36分
作文基本切題,內(nèi)容較充實,結(jié)構(gòu)較清晰、完整,語言較通順,表達較清楚,有些用詞不當(dāng),
但可以理解,有少數(shù)語法錯誤和拼寫錯誤。
第四檔:35——18分
作文基本切題,內(nèi)容不夠充實,結(jié)構(gòu)不夠清晰,語言不夠通順,表達不夠連貫,有較多語法錯
誤和拼寫錯誤。
第五檔:17——10分
作文部分切題,內(nèi)容不充實,結(jié)構(gòu)不清晰,語言不通順,表達不連貫,有較多語法錯誤和拼寫
錯誤。
第六檔:9分——0分
作文不切題,內(nèi)容空洞,結(jié)構(gòu)較混亂,語言不通順,無法表達連貫意思。